Very pretty! I like the little bleeps of dissonance you throw in, as well as the plastic snapping percussion. SackJo22 just tops it off. Nice mix.

Quite lovely. The music and the vocal engage each other in a very sweet way — the rhythms of my delivery enhanced by what you created musically. I really enjoyed listening to this track. Thank you so much for including me.

Very lovely arrangement and very good selection of instruments.
Rich in variation underlined with Susan’s unique voice and very nice finish.

As comments are welcome, a small criticism.
In my opinion, the bleeps fit in general, except on the first drum part, they are dispensable and almost annoying (very high beeps).

Very Nice. This is the kind of thing I’d do. I don’t agree so much with donnie’s observation around the ‘very high beeps’. You keep a nice mix of musical elements, rhythm and vocal fx (slicing etc).