Hey There, really fine mix.

You may want think about lowering the compression on the mp3 though (up the bit rate to 196 or 256). I’m hearing frequency cut off all over the place and its a bit of a mix spoiler.

I do especially like the sounds that make up your initial drum beat. Nice work, its just hidden in the poor quality mp3.

i gave this a rec for the obvious thought & talent in the mix. i agree w/ earlier tech comments. you’ll also pick up a lot of detail by increasing the number & size of the buffers in your recording program & set the compression & limiters to where they aren’t on all the time.
nice mix, man.