I like the basic beat, and the beginning does sound nice; however, later in the piece the music just becomes… unmelodic. I am not a musician myself (and not a native English speaker), so I lack the correct vocabulary. Basically it begins to sound as if two disharmonic tunes are playing at the same time.

I hope Briareus will clean it up, however, because I feel the basics aren’t bad.

I agree that some parts of this work better than others - but there’s an exuberance about it that I really like.