Cool- the song takes on a joyful, almost adorable quality, some nice attentive musical touches (I smiled especially when the bass echoed her staggered descending line). Some of the instrumental tracks could stand to have a warmer, less sequenced sound in places for my taste, but don’t let my 2 cents stop you from doing your thing; welcome aboard!
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Well, not a music style I really like, but I wanted to leave a review because you took a completely different direction with this acappella and the results are lovely.

It’s a pity (as duckett already said) that the sequenced sound is so obvious; and, as this is not intended to be an electronic mix, it should sound (at least in my opinion) more natural. Maybe with more final production work (like adding reverb) and some background pads or strings to “fill the blanks” this could sound really superb! :)

You did a good job here. This sounds like a little summerhit. Fine and joyfull composition. I second duckett_s comment towards your “sequenced” sounds which is for me only a minor thing. I try to imagine how it would sound if you_d taken high class sounds? Fore sure it would sound like a GREAT summerhit!
Very nice track which could have last one minute longer…:-)

I like the arrangements and harmonies you make to this song. I agree with duckett and sc mixer in the sense that this mix needs more naturalness (perhaps I’m not the most appropriate to say this).


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