Here’s what I think: Overall it has a nice, smooth, clean, dreamy feel. The opening is pretty good, imo. I like the sound of the keyboard, the way the background guitar (at least I think it’s the guitar) and bass worked themselves in. There are also several subtle touches with the instrumentation and arrangement that I think belies a lot of work and planning into it. It sounds good when played straight from my Mac, and even better with the earphones.

OK, some personal preferences here: I would have gone for a more obvious guitar lead, but maybe that would have ruined the feel you were trying to create. The ending was abrupt (the track got cut off?).

Excellent and beautiful song. I love that space-synth. What are you using?

Yes, this is very good (one of many good remixes uploaded today). I guess that the lead guitar mentioned by Ivan is a personal thing, because I didn’t really miss it, but the track does seem to end a bit abruptly. The only minor point of an otherwise great remix.

Sorry for not commenting until now, I have had limited computer access and only had time to “thumb-up” the other morning. This is very well done, and a great interpretation of the vocal…the lyrics were inspired by the
“Spacing Guild Navigators” in the Dune novels (pilots immersed in tanks of drugs who begin to physically atophy and then gain prescience and the ability to fold space). My point being, you can’t go wrong with a space synth. :)