Interesting interpretation. Sounds decent, albeit a little bit lazy, though. I don’t mean your craftsmanship is lazy, just the overall feel of the piece.

Nope, don’t really like it.

I like it. U took the minimal approach. it’s effectively sparce if that makes any kind of sense. hey, that’s my interpretation. The form is pretty good standard too. ABAB (small C section) ABB. Gotta change the outro, bro.