good work! do more midi anytime - it shows more of your own musical persona. By the way, I think your mp3 sample rate or something doesn’t make it in the ccMixter flash player, so you may not get as many listens as you deserve.

I loved your musical style,

It’s Good. Your first Midi but It’s obvious not your first song…
I recommend to midi drums to give more expression to the song. In my case, I have a very good loops collection so I SLICE the drums into Beats and hits and modify a little the loops in some parts. Also I add cymbals and background snares. This helps the song to keep the loop sound and style but with expression, more natural, not so monotonous.