MMT- I know this seems incredibly self-serving, but I do like the song. We’ve both put a lot of work into it, and I believe the product bears the marks. It may not be for everyone. It’s not a happy or triumphant electro-pop hit, but it’s what happened. I stand ready to work with you at anytime. FB

Bleak, and not in a pretty way, which is a place not a lot of artists let themselves go. The result is sort of a musical Guernica (Picaso’s painting.)

one thing I loved about early 70s rock was that it often had a narrative quality—not necessarily in the “concept album” sense, but rather the sense that a guitar, drums and bass could tell “stories” a former time had relegated to orchestras. In our current time, post-rock goes that extra step, replacing the story with the sense of the symphonic “without alloy for story”. Here FB’s shown how much you can do with a straightforward ‘rock’ sound to bring this vocal live. You’ve provided a great vocal to really make the piece sing. The mixing is great here—I really like the first appearance of the vocals, and the way that throughout the vocal and the sound seem to fit together well. Once in a while I thought it might have been fun to have an additional roving bass line, or perhaps even an octave-down twin of the guitar line. The percussion, the guitar, and the way you’ve mixed here really make this piece work—it’s a nice journey, a teleportation from 1972 to 2011 and back again, and a fun listen.

its a musical wabi-sabi for me….

I raise my glass to the pair of you…
a difficult idea realized…

MMT and FPB, you are a perfect match! Dare I ask how you take these musical journeys, FPB? The vocals on top of this are another journey in itself.

Well Done..Melody..Lyric..Very Nice

This is really cool!