The opening vocal slow-down doesn’t work for me. The funk backing is interesting. The bass line should pull up a bit, to me, to make the effect more complete.
I love that little period strings wash—very well done. A female backing chorus of some sort would have been fun. As the song wears on, it needs a bit more variation—an instrumental break would be both period-appropriate and leaven up the piece a bit. Still, a fun remix.