This one is a bit uneven. I like the synth melody and the beats, and the decision to overdrive the vocals is not a bad decision at all.

Yet it all feels a bit disjointed, because the way you start it off with an a capella and then blend into your instrumental accompaniment sounds rough to my ears. I think that the early going might benefit from either the full accompaniment, or perhaps a voice-and-beats approach, but the current approach (especially with the little distortion pops) sounds a bit disjointed.

I like that synth line a lot, but in places it muddies up a bit.

This one has potential for a restructure that would make it much more effective, but it doesn’t really quite work yet.