That’s a cool beat to put with this song! Very enjoyable. Also, I like your choice of chords under the vocals.
The only thing I could find in this mix that I found questionable was the intro +outtro- they were a bit scary-sounding.
Otherwise, I love the bouncyness of this track. Thanks!

Wellcome on da board. Pregnant mix, clear structures, i like a lot this song brotha…

You know what? I really like this. It’s a totally original take on the song and it works. What more can you ask for?