Wow! This is truly an inspiring work. Your use of dynamic contrast is excellent and the mix is first class.

Seems I have to go back to techno kindergarten and repeat the course.

cool remix! I like all of the rhythmic loopiness and vocoding madness! Just one question: Have you tried maybe using less reverb to allow the individual parts to sound more defined? It might give even more sparkle to the whole remix.

p.s. your notes sound like a good beginning for a cool set of lyrics :-)

nice work, just right.