Quote: Eric ELZIEREGood job! Nice use of vocoder FXs! Maybe a real chorus is missing to alternate with verses.

Yes apparently I’ve had these toys for a few years but I never fooled with them before. I think I likey. Chorus…yes…that’s what’s missing! I’m going to say Monday I will add something but I might get an urge before then…That is of course unless someone wants to remix it and add a chorus to it. That’d be cool too.

Quote: stevieb357I thought this was an excellent job. I liked the effects and thought it blended very nicely.

Thanks you. Technically I still have to finish it but it is one of my favorites of late. I also learned with this song…that I liked a certain effect that I thought I hated. I used it to make my misery sound more pronounced. Liked it. Thanks for listening.

I will post the full lyrics when I get home from work about 10pm. You are pretty close but it’s not quite it. I just recently lost all my typed lyric sheets, music equipment, and everything else in a fire, but I did manage to save a box that had the certificates and some backup lyrics. Will post tonight. Thanks for taking an interest in this.

Oops, I wasn’t expecting a reply
First edition at
http://www.youtube.com/watc...

Here are the lyrics. Sorry about the garbled vocals. I tried to do it myself, lol. Unfortunately I no longer have the equipment to sing it again, but here ya go…..

Nice video by the way.

I ain’t got no cigarettes and I feel like killin’ yeah
But I’ll just take my time and maybe I’ll start healing and lose this feeling yeah
The next time I wake up in a sweat and I’m climbin’ the ceiling (aw)
I’ll try and remember that stinky breath is not very appealing, and it’s not endearing
I try to make it to goal but it’s not that easy
I tried givin’ it my all but I feel like screaming
But I don’t wanna be the one who said what she didn’t mean
I don’t wanna be a broken dream and I don’t wanna be almost clean
I just want it to be done (yeah oooh oooh oooh oooh)
I just want it to be done
So now I’m feeling desolate casue my smokies long been gone
And I’m trying hard to wrestle this but I can only be so strong
And I’m crying cause I’m restless and I’m so lonely here’s a song
And I hope I gain respect for this cause it takes me so damn long
And I just want it to be done (yeeeeeeeah)
I just want it to be done
I just want it to be done
I just want it to be done
I just want it to be done

Now at http://www.youtube.com/watc...

You should contact Timiarah Camburn: she is the only one that can help you! :-)